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		<title>By: Eva</title>
		<link>http://anal-amy.com/i-need-you-help-with-my-fiction-writing/#comment-1795</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Eva]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Sep 2013 02:36:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Pick a theme.  Ask yourself, how can (insert theme) help a character grow?  What type of character would grow most from this theme?  What is her background?  What are her likes and dislikes?  What are her hangups?  Can this theme help her overcome these hangups?

Do your character sketches so you know them.  Really understand your supporting characters as well, so their actions and dialogue are always &quot;in character.&quot;
Write a detailed outline.  What is the location?  What will you describe in the setting?  Describe the setting in such a way as to support the emotions and actions of the characters.  What is the timeline?  Who is in each scene?  What will they do?

Writing good erotica is about more than the sex.  Focus should be on the characters&#039; thoughts and emotions as the action happens.  Think of it as a rollercoaster ride.  The thoughts and emotions and character&#039;s reactions are the coaster and the actions are the rails, with huge drops and turns and loops, which bring the coaster to its final destination.  The character should be different in some way than he/she was in the beginning.

Post your work on Literotica to get feedback.  If people like your work, consider self publishing ebooks on Amazon.

Eva Reigns.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Pick a theme.  Ask yourself, how can (insert theme) help a character grow?  What type of character would grow most from this theme?  What is her background?  What are her likes and dislikes?  What are her hangups?  Can this theme help her overcome these hangups?</p>
<p>Do your character sketches so you know them.  Really understand your supporting characters as well, so their actions and dialogue are always &#8220;in character.&#8221;<br />
Write a detailed outline.  What is the location?  What will you describe in the setting?  Describe the setting in such a way as to support the emotions and actions of the characters.  What is the timeline?  Who is in each scene?  What will they do?</p>
<p>Writing good erotica is about more than the sex.  Focus should be on the characters&#8217; thoughts and emotions as the action happens.  Think of it as a rollercoaster ride.  The thoughts and emotions and character&#8217;s reactions are the coaster and the actions are the rails, with huge drops and turns and loops, which bring the coaster to its final destination.  The character should be different in some way than he/she was in the beginning.</p>
<p>Post your work on Literotica to get feedback.  If people like your work, consider self publishing ebooks on Amazon.</p>
<p>Eva Reigns.</p>
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		<title>By: le</title>
		<link>http://anal-amy.com/i-need-you-help-with-my-fiction-writing/#comment-1773</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[le]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Jul 2013 23:15:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Suggestion for your wicked stories.

Came across reading about: http://london.danslenoir.com/ - but with a kind of a more delicate menu:

Nicole is preparing your birthday. 
In complete Darkness. 
With selected friends for ...

Btw: Congrats to your happiness and &quot;The slutty wife&quot; it&#039;s then..?
With or without you - its always a hard time!
THX for writing  ..]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Suggestion for your wicked stories.</p>
<p>Came across reading about: <a href="http://london.danslenoir.com/" rel="nofollow">http://london.danslenoir.com/</a> &#8211; but with a kind of a more delicate menu:</p>
<p>Nicole is preparing your birthday.<br />
In complete Darkness.<br />
With selected friends for &#8230;</p>
<p>Btw: Congrats to your happiness and &#8220;The slutty wife&#8221; it&#8217;s then..?<br />
With or without you &#8211; its always a hard time!<br />
THX for writing  ..</p>
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		<title>By: Amy</title>
		<link>http://anal-amy.com/i-need-you-help-with-my-fiction-writing/#comment-1767</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Amy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jul 2013 02:39:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[No rest is right, but a girl has to do what a girl has to do. 

I like all three ideas, so this kind of helps me decide what to start with.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No rest is right, but a girl has to do what a girl has to do. </p>
<p>I like all three ideas, so this kind of helps me decide what to start with.</p>
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		<title>By: Amy</title>
		<link>http://anal-amy.com/i-need-you-help-with-my-fiction-writing/#comment-1766</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Amy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Jul 2013 02:38:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I think you&#039;re right. I expected one story to be more of a runaway, but I can see that you guys just want me to write slutty stories. ;-)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think you&#8217;re right. I expected one story to be more of a runaway, but I can see that you guys just want me to write slutty stories. <img src="http://anal-amy.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif" alt=";-)" class="wp-smiley" /> </p>
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		<title>By: Red Light Sydney</title>
		<link>http://anal-amy.com/i-need-you-help-with-my-fiction-writing/#comment-1764</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Red Light Sydney]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jul 2013 09:47:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Looks like you have a split of almost 33% each! I guess that means you should write all three?

No rest for the wicked ;)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Looks like you have a split of almost 33% each! I guess that means you should write all three?</p>
<p>No rest for the wicked <img src="http://anal-amy.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif" alt=";)" class="wp-smiley" /> </p>
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		<title>By: Sleepyeyedboy</title>
		<link>http://anal-amy.com/i-need-you-help-with-my-fiction-writing/#comment-1761</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sleepyeyedboy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Jul 2013 11:06:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You&#039;re more than welcome.  And I see by the votes so far that your public basically just wants you to write. ; )]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re more than welcome.  And I see by the votes so far that your public basically just wants you to write. ; )</p>
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		<title>By: Amy</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Amy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Jul 2013 12:38:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[That&#039;s a good idea! I looked to see if there was a way to do it with this poll plugin, but I didn&#039;t see a way to do it. However, thanks for the note about the second choice.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s a good idea! I looked to see if there was a way to do it with this poll plugin, but I didn&#8217;t see a way to do it. However, thanks for the note about the second choice.</p>
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		<title>By: Sleepyeyedboy</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sleepyeyedboy]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Jul 2013 11:41:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You might set up the poll to allow people to rank their choices from top to bottom like in an instant runoff primary.  For example my second choice would be good girl gone bad.  I&#039;ll stop with math stuff this early in the morning.  Yay for the inclusions!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You might set up the poll to allow people to rank their choices from top to bottom like in an instant runoff primary.  For example my second choice would be good girl gone bad.  I&#8217;ll stop with math stuff this early in the morning.  Yay for the inclusions!</p>
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